ummmm ....

Uhhhhhhhh k then ... Long live ... Swing Hai! lol
Thats the only thing that this taught me ":) kinda sad eh hahahaha ... I'm crazy but you get a 5 just cause this was kinda funny and disturbing.

nice

ok,it is some short but is is good and I will doe evriething to keep this

Not too shabby, but you know you can do much more.

I'd have to agree with Cheebo on a couple remarks. #1. Thanks for taking care of Carrot Top. My love for his humor is equal to that of my love for Terry Bradshaw--Both are about as hilarious as algebra. #2. I'm kind of a fan of altering picture files, however, the hand-painted text could go. Whether or not you were going for a laid-back look or not, I'm not sure. Maybe you were just eager to finish your shorts. ::Shrugs:: Either way, you seem to have a pretty good sense of humor and I'd bet you could come out with something for the Top 50's if you put enough effort into it. Keep 'em comin'.

--Jinx

2dP 4eva

All must pay approprate respects to 2dP. Bow mortals! Thank you Critter for reminding us all of an important lesson.

Congrats on your first submission

I liked this, I mean, you didn't hand draw it as a cartoon and used a collection of pictures but it was effective and you made good use of audio. These shorts reminded me of Montey Pythons shorts, and I loved the fact Carrot Top got taken out by the kid LOL! The only thing you should work on if you continue this style is your lettering, the neon "EWW" was kind of ugly looking whereas a text tool would've made a nice smooth one. Don't get discouraged if people give you crap about this, newgrounds has lots of assholes, and each with a similarily pungent opinion.