this is so good
great animation
great art
great writing
great voice acting
great job
I paid 5 dollars for this!?
Animated and written by Skyler Simas
Featuring:
Skyler Simas as Skyler (https://skittlewaffle.newgrounds.com/)
Amy Portillo as David (https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCjyS...)
Brian Vargas as Brian (https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCtvB...)
Special thanks to Seb, Amy, My sanity, Kai, and NewGrounds
Whoo boy another animation down! I'm having a ton of fun making these. I was going to release this on October 29th but I figured since it was already done I didn't want to wait any longer. It's still October so it still counts. See you next time!
this is so good
great animation
great art
great writing
great voice acting
great job
Loved this so much, Excellent work!
Thank you!
I enjoyed it. But it annoys the hell out of me that if you tweaked a few little things, this cartoon would have been a 5. Work on your pacing and voice acting. I see potential.
First the pacing. This cartoon should have been a little over 2 minutes tops. For example, the first 25 seconds should have been cut to 13 seconds, and 13 is pushing it. Show title card, cut to the establishing exterior shot of the house for 3 seconds tops, cut to the living room for 2 seconds, and cut to the news broadcast for 1 second. No need to pan the camera to the sofa. No need to linger on shots for too long like the tv, especially when nothing interesting is going on. The interesting part is the power going out and stuff getting crazy. Let's get to that stuff! I could keep going but, I hope you get the idea.
Second is the voice acting. Needs more emotion. For example at the 31 second mark, the "who's there" line was said with a whimper, homie. Be more crazy. Scream that shit in terror if you have to.
With all that said, looking forward to your future work. Like I said before, I see the potential.
Thank you I appreciate it! The only reason the voice acting is dull is because my friends have to come over to my house to record the lines since they don't have computers. And I live in a apartment rn so I can't really talk to loudly. But next time I'll see if I can find a solution.
1:20 was that a blair witch reference? xD
But yeah, really did enjoyed this one. I can tell the animation itself has got alot better over the months. Very smooth frame rate indeed. I can also tell the art has polished up a bit more. You really know how to take advice lol. Also the voice acting was pretty good too and more louder. A really amazing job! Keep up the good work! :)
Thanks man! I'm glad you stuck around to see my improvement! And yeah that was a reference >:D
it is very look with the old animations of edd's wolrd