I spent the first 5 days of the jam working on it and after watching the finished animation I hated it and animated 5 days for in a day and a half. But hey @brandybuizel was able to animate his in 24 hours and that looked amazing so I thought maybe I could animate something mediocre in 36 hours
There's a bunch of stuff I wish I could do better (its weirdly fast sometimes, the lines are still a bit inconsistent like always, the choriography could be better and i only used flat colours because i only had 2 days.)
Any feedback is greatly appreciated I'm doin this to learn
This is looking good so far, I kind of wished there was more lighting to see the character at the side of the cave. Having her kind of hidden in the darkness loses the focus on her. Also don't be afraid to do some smears, that would have helped make the last jump a bit less awkward.
As I said before this is good for having this done in 36hrs :]
Thanks for the review and advice I guess I went over board with the lighting, I always like doing lighting like that because its quick to do and makes everything look fancy but I made it way to dark I think I was trying to overcompensate for the flat colouring. More smears is a good idea I'm always really cautious about using them
Thanks again for the advice it helps a lot
