Good job! You need to work on your audio, though. Voices were hard to make out at times. And well, animation can be improved, but I'm sure you already knew that.
Here's a pilot episode (that will most likely go nowhere) for an assignment in my digital arts class. Pretty heavily inspired by Zack Hadel's 'Smiling Friends', it's about a hack 'Make a Wish Foundation'. This took me about a week to create. Hope you enjoy :)
Good job! You need to work on your audio, though. Voices were hard to make out at times. And well, animation can be improved, but I'm sure you already knew that.
Thank you :) really helpful to receive this kinda criticism, I’ll b sure to practice my audio mixing. (And the animation can always be improved lol). Thank you for taking the time to watch and criticize my lil project :)
This is good
clean story with unique art and a solid setup for the characters. looking forward to more.
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It's pretty good for a college project, though if you wish to turn this into a legit series there are improvements that need to be made. However I know you'll figure stuff out and this will be amazing. Keep up the good work!
Thank you! I'm flattered you got the impression this is a college project, I actually made this junior year of high school lol.
The video made ME smile, does Smilecorp have a Yelp page, haha
I'm glad you enjoyed it :). If smilecorp had a yelp page I'm sure it'd be like 3/5 stars.
i like it!
I'm glad you do!