What's here isn't much of an improvement. The title screen is barebones with no music and the most generic font you can find. Then the actual game is blinding with loads of bloom and effects. It contrasts badly and neither is pleasing to look at. The gameplay feels sluggish, with the playing field being too small for such big entities. And the player resetting back to the center is disorienting.
This isn't even an original game with any sort of interesting mechanic or twist, so I can't even score you on that. It's literally Pong, except worse to look at and less fun to play.
I didn't enjoy being so negative. I know game dev can be tricky when you just start out, so I hope that you can take these things to heart and improve on your next game. Make sure to hit preview before submitting and check if things work.