Intriguing... But, as you said, animation needs improvement. It should also be noted that we can't really see the connection between all the different characters, 3 unrelated acts.

Great, though I feel like the animation is a bit choppy throughout most of the time. I still look forward to more content!

las escenas con animacion son pocas pero esta bien dibujado todo

3 acts that had literally nothing to do with each other. And that's your first episode? Are you sure you don't wanna start your story with a more coherent event? Why do you introduce all these characters, but don't bother giving them something interesting to do?

Pretty good! Only the animation is a little lame. Sometimes I would like a couple of frames more. The drawing style is interesting. I'm wondering what will happen next. I wish you the development of the project!