For a reanimated collab entry, this was mediocre. The animation did look kinda flat, but I'm not sure if that was due to inexperience or a stylistic choice. Either way, it was quite noticeable, and it really killed the vibe that the original scene was going for. I'd give this half-baked animation a few more minutes in the oven if I were you. You do have some potential, and I wish you the best of luck in your future endeavors.