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A414 Episode 2.5

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Subject is sent back to his room to get some rest between sessions.

Voices by Midnight Datura

All other audio licenced and mixed by me.

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Got me real good with that loud sound at the end.

Glad that there's story, but the walking was very slow. Typically having a cut would speed things along and let the audience move toward what happens next. There doesn't seem like a need to have the shot be this slow moving through the hallway. Maybe next time start like 10 seconds before the residential door closes to get the audience ready?

MaximusJ responds:

I feel you, but I think there's also something to be said for natural pacing, taking the time to pause and establish reasoning, set our eyes on a goal and have those expectations be subverted is the aim here.

Plus, the entire premise of the series is that it could be viewed end to end and make perfect sense, besides periods of unconsciousness, It may result in dull moments like this occasionally, I do try my best to keep the pacing up, EP 3 fell into a trap of length for lengths sake, which I hope I addressed for 4, so it's a process.

Thanks for taking the time to provide some feedback :)

The plot thicken?

Many questions to be answered.

want to know what happens next

Credits & Info

3.59 / 5.00

Jul 23, 2021
5:23 AM EDT
  • Blender
  • Audacity
  • DaVinci Resolve
  • Reaper