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Writing Sample

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This is a short sample of my writing as produced on VX Ace. It also serves as an example of my narration/voice acting ability. If you're interested in working with me, please let me know!

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I think it's a decent submission. The voice acting isn't the best, but at least I can see that enough effort was put into this. I am really glad that it didn't make me cringe to death like you'd usually expect from submissions with a rating this low.

Also, since I see you can kind of make stuff in RPG Maker and such, maybe try making a sample of your writing into some sort of short RPG. I think it would be more enjoyable that way.

Aslanemperor responds:

I do have a game that I've finished, but I have to hold out on publishing it here because it's part of a gamejam. I do believe that as of TODAY, I can post it here, as the submission period is over.

0/5 STARS BC YOU VOTED LOW ON MINE!!!!!!!!! Ok but for real I think you did good but I voted a little low bc I feel like the voice acting isn't the best. But I mean it isn't THAT bad. I like the story and the character design but the only issue I have is the voice acting.

Aslanemperor responds:

I don't really like my own voice either. Technically I'm just a writer. I can do SOME acting and am okay at it, but it's not my strongpoint by any means! Thanks for a fair rating!

Credits & Info

2.01 / 5.00

Jul 19, 2021
4:29 PM EDT
  • OBS
  • RPG Maker VX Ace