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I don’t know what the fuck I’m doing here but I’m here to stay I guess

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lmfao

Animation and jokes are solid, voice acting is a bit lackluster though

First I gotta say great thumbnail lmao, now this animation was goofy and you definitely seem to had fun making it, when it comes to making mouths move you can choose many ways to go about doing it, I would say try not to just keep em moving nonstop cuz it looks awkward when they aren't actually talking, but I also do like that you used multiple angles in different shots which is great for building up a setting, also I can't tell if you laughed or it was part of the audio at the end but regardless it was random and made me chuckle so thank you, keep practicing your stuff, hope to see some great things from you as time goes on amigo :>

Pros: the voice acting is solid at least

cons: this looks baaaad. Bad animation and there are errors you can see right thru, story does not have any substance to its just. You came to Newgrounds and made an animation about it. It's just too simple and kinda does not work as a story. Also, I just have to say. You gotta change your animation software. Because the errors in them are staggering and also improve your animation and drawing skills. Its just not good. But hey you just joined in. And there is potential

Dragonmaster245 responds:

I’m the type of animator that works in short bursts. My cartoons get suckier the longer it goes. I’m practicing ok? Also, what’s there to be a story about? I came to Newgrounds. That’s it. But, in all, thanks for the criticism and I’ll use that going forward.

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Score
2.63 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jul 4, 2021
11:43 AM EDT