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StickSchool Episode 5: The New Kid

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A new kid with a hard to pronounce name could replace Max as a best friend in his group.

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StickSchool is a show following the lives of students attending this wacky school.

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As somebody new to the "StickSchool" series, I'd have to say that this is a pretty neat animation and despite knowing next to nothing, this is a pretty neat, yet simple story.

However, there are a few things that I felt could've been done differently:

1. For the reoccuring shots of the school, I feel you should have a slower yet still fast jingle (like 3-6 seconds if possible), so that away it doesn't feel too jarring.
2. The MrBeast scene would've worked better with the writing if you showed him doing something really charitable (for example donating to a hospital like in the video where MrBeast and his team donates $100,000 to various hospitals).
3. During the scene where the guys go fishing, I feel the shot would've worked better if you not had moved the background as they aren't really moving.
4. At the beginning after he said "Uh right, what he said", it would better to replace the school shot with a "After Class" time card.

Also I feel as if the clouds on top in the intro need to be removed as they have been cropped weirdly.

But overall, I do really like how it's a nice simple animation made by somebody clearly passionate in the craft, and hope you can continue to make some neato animations cause I can see you have some talent :)

StickSchoolStudios responds:

Thank you, I will try to improve as much as I can!

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Jun 4, 2021
5:24 AM EDT