Pretty Good Pretty Good
I liked it good story and nice action
I am glad you did... im submitting part 2 with the subtitles cause man my audio ois killin me... also saves me on lipsync time..that's a killer thanx again fer the tips! yall
Ok. you had some great stuff, and some not so great stuff... Your 'photography'or camera angles were all very good. The graphics vere very well done. :) nice work on the characters, the contrast etc...
VOICES.. hm its not your voice. its your microphone technique and your microphone itself. You had so many POPPING Ps. that when air hits the mike. You need to position it so that its not too close to your mouth. Also. you need to shell out at LEAST 50 bux (american) for a half ass mike. Anybody that ever want to use decent voices should own a dynamic directional mike!
what would have improved it, (given the bad sound qual) would have been captions.
Hm thats about all for now. Oh. and a Preloader is a MUST! a MUST!!!
Thanx for the tip man
i did have a severe problem with the mike... oh God! But i will buy me a decent one for the rest. The preloader is on the works =0)
I loved it! no preloader though, you are really good at drawing it seems, but i think you should learn a bit more about flash. With no start button i couldnt even wait until its finished loading until i watched it, good though. Keep up the good work!
Donot worry im working on the rest
and there will be a start button.
The sound effects i had to make distorting my voice and blue beast's
thanx fer the support!
i like the style and the animation, but could use some music and better sound effects. oh and make it so it doesnt loop over and over.
Thank you... i would really love it if i could have some help there!
I got the next part and i want to give it a pre loader and a play button!!!