The animation is pretty cute!
The only thing I could say is a bit more animation.
Other than that Good Work!

Awwwwwww, the voice acting was extremely cute! and it fits perfectly with the art style!

The art style is adorable, the voices are adorable and fit the characters well, and the plot was great! my only critique would be that the time skip between days kind of confused me a little. Other than that, I loved it!

Haha, really amusing that you let your kids voice the cartoon. Lovely to see someone make stuff like this! It's slightly storyboard-y but still has a lot of charm. I'd love to see more of this, actually.