It's a dude, with a torch, and he is walking, perhaps some sounds of footsteps would be good to have! Walking is certainly one of the hardest things to accomplish, don't think I have ever properly managed it, and your walk here looks a little rough around the edges, but it's certainly not bad, it's getting there!
The lighting from the torch is good, although the back of the walking man should be a little darker I believe, as the light wouldn't be hitting there. Of course, lights are a different matter! I can't really give you a high rating on this because it doesn't really go anywhere, it looks like a bit of a test more than anything, but it's a great start, and shows good promise!