well made game just a little short

I had a lot of fun:)

Just gonna post my honest critique here. Sorry if it's a bit tough to swallow.

So, I think this has a lot of potential. I really like RPGs. Especially ones about dragons. However, this game has a lot of big problems. I played this game a while ago, but stopped because I didn't really know about the search mechanic, which I feel like is really important to progress. You can't really beat Erwin without it. Also, the plot makes absolutely no sense. Erwin is not believable as a villain. His reveal as a villain felt like a Diabolus Ex Machina (Opposite of deus ex machina). I think it would have been a lot better if there were hints beforehand that he's a monster. Another problem is the patriarch. Was he a vision that Ray had? A god? A memory? What was with that? Also, there were waaay too many spelling and grammar errors. Additionally, most of the dialogue made no sense. They don't talk like how people actually talk. And none of the characters really had any depth. I felt nothing when playing this game. RPGs should make you feel.

I love this game! Really fun to pass the time with.

this is quite a shocking title i never knew games could be just like this