Hey! Listen, I like your style and this seems cute and wholesome, maybe even funny, but I don't know why you divided the stuff like you did. I even checked your website and everything is fleshed out much better there. By making this snippets so short, the viewer can barely grasp your work, the story, the characters, the dialogue, the humour...

I'd wait to assemble all the scenes together and then upload a complete episode (even if it's just a storyboard/animatic) because, if not, you're not making justice to your own creation and people won't appreciate it as they should.