I'll be the first to admit, I wasn't expecting this to be as entertaining as it was. The bit at the start where you enlarge the background should have been edited out, as it sorta gives a bad first impression. The "editorial comments", your little bits of narration and pointing out those doritos, were also unnecessary and took me out of it a little bit. Be careful with doing these things in the future and try to show important information without just telling it straight to the audience. The dialogue wasn't the best, obviously, but it did have fun bits. The Super Mario part's gag about the pipe was pretty well constructed. The zapping by random things was a bit jarring and I think you could have done more with each world. I did really like the Pokemon entrance, that one felt satisfying. In the end, you copied Animator vs Animation in an obvious way, but the action, for what it was, was still pretty interesting.

Overall, you should try to tell more visually or at least through dialogue, without resorting ot 4th wall breaks, and try to explore your premise's potential more. You'll get better at animation and writing with time if you practise, so keep it up!