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Poetry Lovers

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Writing poems can be fun, eh?


===CREDITS===

Story, Direction, and Animation: Charles Brubaker

Music: Kevin MacLeod (https://filmmusic.io/)

Sound: Sound Dogs

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literally me and my sister in any situation bc everything's boring HAHAH!! So cute X3

A fun toon

So here with this one you have a fun toon very entertaining with the happenings but these characters are funny So The Starting sequence in this is great infact I love how you start this off and finish it with a bang, So I say this has some good heart flavor about it, But overall I found this to be pretty good, Its not all the time that one comes across a movie submission like this one its some what differant but has an exciting feel and touch here, As soon as this started it was something unique and differant ofcourse but thats more on the plus side of things.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
too funny to change anything its great as is

~X~

I liked the animation a lot, very expressive. Designs are cute also.
Audio was alright. Maybe you went a bit too hard on some effects, but considering there are no voices, you kinda needed to do that.

I think the narrative was a bit strange, I was kind of hoping they'd read their weird poetry to the club. It seems that main point (them being in poetry club) was pretty much only used for an awkward pause, before the main characters retreated for coffee. It didn't really build up to anything, so that felt off to me.

I'm loving these characters already

Love the old newspaper comic kinda style, and the expressions are great only thing is the sound effects seem overabundant and its melting my precious ears, still a fun and neat animation good work.

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Uploaded
Jan 22, 2021
9:28 AM EST
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