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Good vs Bad writing - The Mary Sue

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Hello and welcome to the second installment of Good vs Bad writting video! This time I'll finally be talking about the Mary Sue, like many of you asked of me. Had a lot of fun on this one so I hope you enjoy.


This is my Deviantart


https://www.deviantart.com/jalenetofficial


This is my YouTube


https://www.youtube.com/channel/UChg8Jok8h3C3DaFNOdpWPoQ?view_as=subscriber


This is my Twitter


https://twitter.com/EtJalen


And here is my Tumblr


https://jalenetofficial.tumblr.com/


(bare with me I'm trying to be more active on Tumblr...)


Webtoons link


https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/peacemaker-chronicles-2020/list?title_no=393462


Tapas link


https://tapas.io/series/Peacemaker-Chronicles-2020/info

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You don't have to make a video and upload it here. You could have just uploaded this as audio in the audio portal

Jalen-ET responds:

Oh thanks for the suggestion! Do think you among others would be interested in some audio only reviews and writing tips?

for some reason when i first saw you're stuff i didn't like it very much, now that i watch it more im starting to really like it

Jalen-ET responds:

Thanks that means a lot! In all honesty that could also be because I'm getting better at making these videos.

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Jul 26, 2020
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