An Amusing Pilot
The introduction was great with Marcus Peblo waking up and the ending was just as good with him jumping up and down on his bed after finding some random key. The pace and sense of timing was terrific I honestly thought the pilot would be under a minute long as well as the quality was definetly underestimated on my part. Keep up the great work the future of the plot for this series sounds like a good one.
The storyline was very confusing with him fighting flame or something that bothered him and he eventually got some key. There was voice acting that explained something, but it was very unclear and you had to really concentrate hard to understand it which I hope is something that improves as the series goes on. The flash also didn't really represent a cast of characters or anything.
Keep up the nice work man a great introduction to your seemingly awesome series just quite confusing and hard to follow with unclear voice acting.