Well, you're certainly off to a good start! This series gets better later. It doesn't hold up as well as the other episodes. It's still good to see where the whole thing started. I like what you do with the preloader. I'm not quite sure how to even start it.
The animation is quite nice. The use of bright colors works so well here. This is a pretty weird voice. Hey, my name's Eric too! While not one of my favorites, I can see why people like this.
Dude this is some trippy shit
An Amusing Pilot
The introduction was great with Marcus Peblo waking up and the ending was just as good with him jumping up and down on his bed after finding some random key. The pace and sense of timing was terrific I honestly thought the pilot would be under a minute long as well as the quality was definetly underestimated on my part. Keep up the great work the future of the plot for this series sounds like a good one.
The storyline was very confusing with him fighting flame or something that bothered him and he eventually got some key. There was voice acting that explained something, but it was very unclear and you had to really concentrate hard to understand it which I hope is something that improves as the series goes on. The flash also didn't really represent a cast of characters or anything.
Keep up the nice work man a great introduction to your seemingly awesome series just quite confusing and hard to follow with unclear voice acting.
buddy, revamp it
I know its your second animation you ever made. But it really suck.
But I think if you revamp ALL episodes for the dvd, more people will buy it. I dont mean "revamp graphic", but revamp EVERYTHING! Story, animations, concept! Then more people buy it ;)
A promising start!
Well this is all a very mysterious start to proceedings here. A lot of mystical sounding mumbo-jumbo is said, and not a single lick of it makes sense! Of course, this is probably all going to be explained in due course, but for a first episode it could be kinder at introducing this strange world.
Shots like the outside one of the sunset and the house looked quite visually impressive and I hope to see more vistas like this in the coming episodes.