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Elon musk takes on the moon

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My funny movie made for Muskjam


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i fuckin like this a lot idk why

good shit

lol this is great! tickles my garbage sense of humour lmao

Dude, your animation I super cool, but there’s too much shouting, it makes it a bit difficult to hear the actual jokes, so you don’t really notice the funny part.
Also the sentences are too long, your audience is guessing the punchline before it’s told.

In conclusion, you gotta work on your delivery and joke writing.

Try mimicking some comedians you like and see what works.

I also heard about a rule in Stand-Up comedy which says, that swearing shouldn’t make it funny, the joke should be able to not have any curse words and still be funny, that said, some jokes improves by adding curse words

Again, love your animations style

too much swearing and not much funny

I love the this kind of animation style and humor keep up the good work.

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Uploaded
Jun 14, 2020
3:49 PM EDT