i rated this 5 stars because of the story, the story is funny as hell, and the animating is so god damn smooth, i have neve in my life seen an animation this smooth, and also the voice acting is amazing as hell. i would love to see episode 2
i rated this 5 stars because of the story, the story is funny as hell, and the animating is so god damn smooth, i have neve in my life seen an animation this smooth, and also the voice acting is amazing as hell. i would love to see episode 2
Hey thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. Going to be posting a new episode here every week! Up to episode 7 already out on my Youtube channel if you want to skip ahead though. YT: Drew Dunn
Complementary music to set the tone, perfect voice acting, impressive physics, fantastic facial expressions, and fitting voice acting to go with the characters. However, every movement with the cameras and characters seems unnatural. Lots of odd transitions with both of them locking so often which really comes off as WAY too unnatural. Not mention it makes things seem rushed.
Overall, it's a solid animation, and don't get me wrong. I can see which style you're going for, just take a bit more time on the scenes overall. Give them some more camera time, leave spaces in between the script so the audience can take in the jokes instead of rushing like the joke at 2:38. It could've been funnier if you left some time where the whole room goes silent and stares at him then have the other guy say his line. It leaves the audience time to laugh and prepares them for the next scene.
Thanks for the review. Glad you enjoyed parts of it. Some it it may seemed rushed, but I am also making these week by week, so I definitely make some sacrifices for the sake of time, but I do see your points. This was also my very first time making something this complicated, so I feel I have learned a lot since. More coming, and thanks again.