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The Dragon's Eye - Public Version

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Small story that tells the war between elves and orcs.

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This is a diamond in the rough. On one hand, there is a sort of end game path that ties things together well, but there could be so much more added to the game that its a bit disappointing that there is not more in the game

I just played through most if not all paths of this game. I immediately loved the music. It is both relaxing and very well timed. I could listen to this soundtrack while working or doing chores. The sounds were astounding. Together, the music and sound effects main this game very immersive and enjoyable.
I really like the varieties in the endings. It gives a nice probability feel to it while being very constant with the story. It makes me curious to play it through all available paths.
The characters are really well done as well. The variety makes the game feel like there is a lot more to it than just a small story between elves and orcs. Plus it always help when characters have vastly different personalities.
The story by itself is interesting. *****SPOLERS***** Magic artifacts, warring races, mysterious plots of other folk, and establishing ghosts perhaps? Beside all that, the story left me wanting more. Could there be a continuation? If so, I am quite interested in exploring all the different types of paths and what kind of characters you have in store.
Overall, I have no complaints. Everything is great. A couple small things. A couple typos and an error with the loading screen prompt. When asked "Are you sure?", I had troubles clicking no.

Typos:
When giving the fairy the invitation at the castle gate, it reads: “I extend the invitation sp she can grab it, and she does it nonchalantly.”

n the castle, when it is prompted to choose one of the two ladies to company your character through the town, and if you select Lisa, it reads a few dialogue lines in: “Old friend enjoys the night and the company if you need something you just have to ask her.” The “enjoys” took me for a spin until I realized it may have been meant to be enjoy.

Good idea. Shame there's lots of angles in this story that could benefit from a longer runtime.

this is great

Wonderfully done, the artwork is amazing and the story is quite enticing.

DidiEsmeralda responds:

Thank you,ponchoman8 I'm glad you like it

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Score
3.67 / 5.00

Uploaded
May 1, 2020
12:17 PM EDT
Software
  • Photoshop
  • Clip Studio Paint
  • Paint Tool SAI
  • Visual Novel Maker
  • Camtasia
  • Daily 4th Place May 3, 2020