Well, compared to the first one, you've grown miles, both in terms of animation and writing. I didn't actually like the first one too much because I felt a little sad for Chad (I know that was the whole point) and the overbearing nature of Fat Fuck, but this one was extremely well developed and better animated (I know you know you can still improve a lot). That ending, though, felt quite like a cheap shot to dampen the mood. It was unexpected, yes, but also uncalled for when compared to the rest of the mood of the chapter and the series. We'll miss her, I guess.
I read you made all the music... Very nice job. The song at the end was great. Did you upload the song here? Or the lyrics?