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Hello! Glad you checked this out! I'd love to hear what you think, this is related to production of Crypt.X so i need all feedback i can get e.g. is the text displaying correctly? Are the animations working? etc.

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the text sound effect needs changing font needs changing ( i recommend these fonts "Courier" or "MS Serif") these 2 are really good fonts and i also like the style of the Crypt.X it looks like "Super Hot" overall rating is 5/5

great quality and beautful background art! the plot is astounding yet the characters are lacking any features...

Animations are working correctly, but the text is quite blurry. If the game is going to contain a lot of texts, I'd make the text larger and crisper, if you can.
I read quite fast, but this text is taking me longer, also because individual letters are close to each other, too. And as soon as you display all the text in the current batch, I'd leave it visible for a bit longer, since now it disappears as soon as it types all text and people might not have enough time to read the last line.

The typing sound sounds a bit weird, too. If I heard it in separation, I'd probably say it's some muffled water rumbling, a distant rain or perhaps a pneumatic drill. It just sounds more like background noise and less like a series of small individual clicks.
Compare, for example, with this:
https://freesound.org/people/EdEditz/sounds/416999/
(not saying you should use this specific sound, just something with similar qualities)

KaizenSH responds:

Heyyy! Thanks for your feedback! Just letting you know i've read the whole thing and i agree with you, especially on the visuals - just now I noticed it's bit blurry :)

So far so good.Everything seems to be in order.

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1.97 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 24, 2020
1:00 PM EST
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