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A Simple but time killing platformer made by a boy of 15 with amzing art and backgrounds.. The game have 5 themes and 15 levels.. Discover it more by playing it..

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Fun little platformer. I enjoyed the artistic backgrounds and the gameplay and jumping mechanisms were great. Well done! :)

I love the graphic design and the music.

Maybe the gameplay is a little too repetitive. Even if you have 5 themes, all the levels look the same.

You should give a least a unique gameplay mechanic for each theme.
But I still had some fun so I won’t complain too much.

Game apart, I’m curious about Creaty Studio. Do you help for graphic design? If yes, can you also do it for a Zelda like? That could interest me for a future project. (Warning, the project is only on paper right now so I still have to see if it’s as enjoyable as I hope. But if it is, that kind of graphic design could interest me).

Great job anyway. Continue like that.

fun!

AdityaChaudhary responds:

Thanks;})

As a newbie, Your game is fine though expecting more games from you.Developing game at 15 is really impressive. All the best for future. 5/5 for your happines. Expecting more compex thing from your next work.And I like the way you hid the key in lev15. I felt little chalenge after lev11.

AdityaChaudhary responds:

Actually lev 15 is a trick...

The game is alright in the art and music but is lacking on other things, as a platformer it is poorly in level design and gameplay, until i complete half of the levels they were boring and unattractive(but the background and art is fine), only after a desert level it kinda feels a new fresh until it becomes bad again, the key helped given more gameplay and i liked that some plaques showed the way for the key, i also like the fire falling on you, but it gets stale bc thats the only thing that happens, the spikes seems off in the air it would be better to be round spikes like megaman or have something below them.

the controls are fine, the character is... normal, i dont feel nothing towards it, it would be ok but i think a character like this and having just a jump mechanic without enemies to jump, kinda ruins it

This is your first game, i dont know if you used assets like the other guy said, but i liked the art, the problems are the lacking of gameplay from characters/enemies/things to do, i can't compare with other people first platformers bc i dont know a lot of them, but i will give a 3,5 even thought it is your first one, i would expect at least gameplay elements of enemies to interact or even moving platforms.

If you want to improve, play other platformers or action games here, or take from famous games, of course you don't need to try to top games made by companies, but i think you need to improve the gameplay, somethings you can do:
- A better character with more than just jump, platformers don't need too much story so you can do any character, animal, i think the best way to choose is for you to think of the controls, what you want the character to do? He can lift and throw things? So he need to look like someone with strenght, does he fly? So he needs wings, having a mechanic to do improves the game a lot

-The game needs more enemies or hazards, at least one of the two, hazards( spikes, bullets, even moving and disappearing platforms) and enemies will give more gameplay, they interact with the player and give more challenge, even if you don't give a mechanic for the main character, just being able to jump on the enemies is already a interaction good enought.

-Level design, the game can continue to have the same 2d linear level with keys, i just think you need to give more hazards and enemies to give more challenges in the level, even a climbing level would already be something fresh for the game, your game now has themes but they didn't feel differently, the different enemies and hazards can give the themes more unique aspects and life, also maybe include lifes too next game, or at least don't have coins if they don't do nothing.

Here one of the best platforming games on NG in my opnion, maybe it can give you new ideas:
https://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/725153

AdityaChaudhary responds:

I know My game is not so good... But thanks for your feedback.. I made this game in a hurry(excitement!!) and I will try my best to make a game more funnier than this one.

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