- Make "jump" open the next level instead of having to click. (It is annoying to have to switch from keyboard to mouse and back, especially if - later on - players will die a lot from your traps)
- The gravity and movement speed can be higher (it feels like your game is playing on the moon at the moment). Adapt the physics NOW, BEFORE you create more levels, otherwise you will later have to remake all the levels because of the changed physics!
- this type of game has been around since forever. Good job as a first attempt (you got something together, brought it to the page and we can actually play), but here is a hell of a lot to do: What will make your game unique? (Collectibles? Storyline? Powerups? (A hint would be a hook to shoot to ceiling and hang from it, wall-jumping, double jump ....) Enemies? Can the cube shoot/fight? (you can replace the cube with any character, give him a sword or bow and arrow, or a machinegun ...)
Author Comments
A (somewhat) comedic puzzle game created with no thought with the level design by a lazy programmer.
ZeppelinGames responds:
Thank you for the lengthy review. Much appreciated. Good idea with just using only the keyboard for ease. The movement is abit slow, but changing the jump height will require me to redesign all the levels. I will have to think about the orientation of the game, but this was more of a first puzzle game and test on Newgrounds
did you forget to add a jump button or something
Es bueno, en ocasiones he mandado al frente al azul, pero es interesante la idea de estos enigmas.