I love the 80s-vibe of the entire vid, looks very promising so far!
About your author comments: Please don't feel bad for taking your time, pal. This glimpse on your work is already thrilling. Don't make the mistake to complete your work too fast-paced and be unhappy with the final result. 1 week more or less doesn't matter in the end, you should be satisfied with the outcome, that's all that counts!
In other words: The only thing fast-paced in your final submission should be Night Owl in his car, nothing else ;)