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So this was notbad at all kind of short and quick but the art work was pretty nice and some very colorful element here, you have some good ideas here with this one some really nice visuals and a pleasent toon you have here so my suggestion here is just make more fun toons anyways great stuff.
my suggestion here is just make more fun toons
Starts on a... "good" premise, but if there was comedy attempted here, none of it landed. With a better script and better voice actors, the animation has potential... ultimately I couldn't understand any of what was said at the end. It went by quickly and garbled and I have absolutely no feelings about it.
Wife? Don't you mean Waifu?
It's not bad but I would have appreciated more animation and a woman voice acting the wife.