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So this was interesting a promotianal video of some sort either barbe Q food or the beach maybe both the animation is really nice and this was some very short animation so do wish there was more to this maybe even leading upto something more with some more exciting element even anyways nice film.

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do wish there was more to this maybe even leading upto something more with some more exciting element

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it should have been rated T... for tits
ha ha ha ha ha ha!!!
ok, that was dick move for me to say that immature crap, but I have to.

I know I was a asshole when I made that long ass review on Going Out With a Yang (2017) and I hope your not mad at me. but if you are still mad at me... I'm stupid.

i might not like RWBY or anime in general, but that some pretty great animation, and i liked the choice for music, you got a talent!.

That was beautifully done.

This was a pretty good animation. Good music. It was really short though. I get what you were going for, but there was very little actual content. You probably could have done an animated gif and gotten the same effect. That and having no actual sound effects sorta took away from the movie as well. Overall, it was pretty good though, aside from the lack of sound sorta making the animation a bit bland. Other than that, the animation itself deserved a good mark.

That said, I don't think a scene like this has any place in the RWBY series anymore. Maybe in the Chibi series. Any anime that does the whole beach thing is just fanservice, and RWBY saves all that fanservice crap for the Chibi series cause that's pretty much all that series is. I personally think the RWBY series needs to end. It's completely derailed after Monty Oum died and it's just spiraling downhill in terms of story. The only way you'll probably get one of these scenes is to make it yourself, which it sounds like you already started here.