I liked it, thought the writing could use some work but I enjoyed the presentation. Keep up the good work!!
Redid an old pilot episode of mine. I made the animation not as shitty as it previously was and made the audio quality better. It's still not as great and as professional as i wish it to be, but at this point I've come to realize it won't look that good until I have many, many years of experience. Either way, this will be the finished web series I plan on working on this year as well as submitting to a web film festival. [Probably a bad idea, but hey, it's worth a try.]
I liked it, thought the writing could use some work but I enjoyed the presentation. Keep up the good work!!
Thank you very much for the feedback! I'll definitely keep it up
The animation could be a lot smoother (the movement of the characters is rather stiff and jarring) but the comedy is pretty alright. The character and world design is weird as all hell, but it kind of fits the theme imo. This is definitely an improvement over your previous works that I've come across. Looking forward to Episode 2 of this when you get around to making it.
thanks for the feedback. I'll keep all this in mind. I had a feeling the animation still wasn't there, but I'm glad it's an improvement. I'll certainly be working hard at getting the animation to be better in the next episode.