SO HOW DO YOU VAILDATE YOUR ACCOUNT TO CREATE A NEW PROJECT
Annoying Adventurers Episode 2 The Gaming Experience
-EDIT 6-10-2019- I (kinda, but not really) improved the movie by shortening the credits so they and the intro don’t seem longer than the movie itself.
Steve breaks the fourth wall... again.
stevetherapper responds:
Ask @TomFulp.
Interesting
Well that was a random one was kind of funny I like the different scenes it was kind of just everywhere and that was ok some more synked in voices would be nice but overall the randomness of this all is nice and a fun film here hope you make more of these.
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the audio could be synked in a bit better or even adding some subtitles.
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stevetherapper responds:
DO NOT ASK FOR SUBTITLES BECAUSE I USE PHONE!
Those Tetris and Metal tracks... don't really sync as well as they could sync. XD Entertaining otherwise, though think you could work some more on the graphics! Distance shots would go well with the close-up's too. And the intro/outro, they are a bit longer than the episode itself aren't they hmm... looking forwward to the next one though.
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stevetherapper responds:
No the intro is not longer than the first episode’s intro. I used the exact same intro as the first episode.
Steve you're great. Love the enthusiasm here. Ya need work though homeboy. Lot of it. The first thing that immediately bugged me was how James was drawn with filled in click-and-drag shapes. Broham draw your best damn circle no matter how bad it looks, the consistency in style will help a ton going forward. Second thing I want to highlight is the mouths. Move em forward. Having someone talk out their jawline looks straight up off-putting.
Truth be told a lot of what you could improve on will just come with time if you keep at this sort of thing. A big thing I'd recommend is using a smaller brush size for your outlines. It'll give you more room for the faces and clothes to breathe a little.
Your intro & credits should also be heavily cut down, doesn't add a terrifying amount right now. Regardless of all this I took note of the black and white sections that were actually really well done. Sketchy af, but really stark in terms of quality compared to the rest of the schtick.
Keep doing what you're doing, and recognize that you're still chilling with the bottom boyos right now. Don't stop drawing and keep trying to do better, don't wallow in the same stuff you're used to. I believe in you SteveTheRapper. Row Row, fight the power.
stevetherapper responds:
Thanks! Also that’s James from FlashFloodStudios. Ask him.
some clever things like how the filled in area with the erased line filled in the other area, and some more interesting camera angles would be cool like imagine a shot od a bullet slowly hitting something angled from behind the bullet. also some not so good sound effects on this one, also that the at the end shouldn't have surprised me as much as it did
stevetherapper responds:
Why?
