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Madness alpha v0.1

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This is a short animation, can you advise me in the comments
how to improve your level of animation.

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That's very awesome. Just a few months in training, and you'll be as powerful as both gabriel and greenpepperstudios

It sorta just starts, the animation is very slow and awkward and it looks like the two guys are tip-toeing around the place.
A good start, but even then you shouldn't be uploading incomplete animations like this to NG, so instead put something like this in the dumpgrounds and submit a finished piece to the movies section.
Oh and sound effects too.

Ksayan responds:

Thank you

Not "too" bad . There is a background and it is decently animated.
Here's how I think you could improve :
- It needs sounds obviously,not neceseraly music. A good video needs a good sound design.
-A better animation:Work to make the animation look smoother. It still feels a bit too robotic when I watch the two protagonists move .
-And a decent length. 8 seconds is too short ! Even if you make a decent 20 seconds video,if it's well made,it'll show your hard work.

That's all folks ! Keep improving,I'd really like to see what you upload next time.
Good continuation :)

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Ksayan responds:

Thank you

Did you upload this before?
Like I said before, you're supposed to upload this at the animation forums.

The animation wasn't the worst I've seen, but the whole thing was very slow and not great. My advice would be, first, not to use random sprites. I mean, a 1337 with a dark oracle? That guy hsould jave all sorts of powers. His buddy never did anything either. The action was just a bit of shooting. As I am not an animator, I can't tell you exactly how to be better, outside of telling you to practice and try checking out some madness tutorials. Also, don't submit tests. They WILL get blammed. Make something longer and more complete. Try more variety in kills, even if it's choppy, it'll be a good start. Also, try adding some sound.

Ksayan responds:

thanks for the review

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Uploaded
Dec 28, 2018
6:52 AM EST