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Rapping with Dick Poe

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Dick Poe is here to teach the children of the world all sorts of life lessons and wisdom. So stick around, have fun, and you just might even learn something along the way...

*Featuring music performed by Maceo Parker

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Well seeing your real animation talent here makes me feel silly for the new submission I reviewed on, but this here shows more. I'm not sure about the writing really, I can't say I laughed. I think the writing needs a bit of work but you're solid on the art and animation half of it. I did chuckle at the big dick/little dick part though. As strange as it was.

Keep going. You might need a writer though.

Imagine my disappointment when I discovered that that this cartoon wasn't about El Paso's local Car salesman Dick Poe. I was all set to see that old geezer rap about cars.

Unique

So this was different it was actually pretty funny especlly startung out of him "CUTTING" his nails, this was a good film you should think about adding more fancey effects and I can see a series come from this, So these reviews tend to get boring, but it does allow me to help you optimize it to its best abilities and whatnot, So lets colorsize it with some creativity, you have started off well sofar.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you should think about adding more fancey effects and I can see a series come from this

~X~

Pretty good. The art was nice. The "deeper meaning" of the whole thing kind of went over my head though.

jAJAJAJAJAJ So Funny

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Score
3.36 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jul 29, 2018
1:27 AM EDT
Genre
Comedy - Original
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