This is a scary story I thought of written down what do you think of the story ?
here is where I got lovely background music https://www.youtube.com/user/myuuji
Notbad
And this was notbad I like it the story is good the voice is notbad but could have more emotion into the story also adding some subtitles would also help that and smoother animation would be a plus you have good stories just need a few polished areas
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added polish
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*Clock shows 11:00pm* "It was 11:30 at night " I burst out laughing at this point, not sure if you did that on purpose. Is your friend playing the piano in the background or is it just a loop?
I love your raw style, keep it up. (Is there a second part to this? It sort of cut out at the end?)
In description now you can find where and whom I get the music from I wish I was there friend but they offer music to all big creepy pasta story tellers glad you really liked my story and ... yeah I thought I should put A.M but I doubted to much thanks so much for the review!! I have two more different stories to show this took me 4-5 hours to make but that is because I used hour to record https://www.youtube.com/user/myuuji music link