Back when I first started out, I adored stories told through cinematography and music alone. As such, I made a 20 minute video inspired by the style. I still admire good videos that adhere to that style. Good ones are difficult to find.
For a 1st time video, this is a truly remarkable. The visuals are blocky but intentionally so and easily forgivable. The music, once the situations unravel, do excellently to convey what is occuring. And the story, while simple, works and works well.
Things I did not like: the constant panning of almost every single shot. In most cases, it worked. But in many cases, a simple cut and still frame would work wonders. There doesn't need to be motion all the time. And during fades, the objects on screen would clearly freeze in place before the fade was complete. And the animation, while blocky, was incredibly simple. It works, but you should work on becoming more expressive in your characters movements.
Overall though, I was very impressed. I look forward to more work from you.