Decent work here

So with these kinds of flicks there is always room for changes and what not, But I believe for most of this you have covered all grounds for the best kind of flick. and you made this pretty good with all sorts of nifty visuals, and while I didnt undertsand the text bubbles this was still entertaining kind of short though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer and more visuals.

~X~

What a punchline. XD Wish I understood what they were saying here (maybe you could translate?) but the animation: impressive! You don't see stuff made with MS Paint too often either! Seems like a forgotten art form. Nice work.

-cd-