Decent work here
So with these kinds of flicks there is always room for changes and what not, But I believe for most of this you have covered all grounds for the best kind of flick. and you made this pretty good with all sorts of nifty visuals, and while I didnt undertsand the text bubbles this was still entertaining kind of short though.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer and more visuals.
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