Short

Well that was not too bad it was actually pretty good, the visuals of the animation was pretty good very smooth and flowed so well I was really impressed with all the elements here, so nice work indeed, wish it was longer though, anyways nice effort on this movie here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
wish it was longer though

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Well that really didn't go the expected way! XD Love how unpredictable it all was, all the way until that ending... plot twists all over. Going by the first expression I really wasn't expecting those turns. But the expression changes with the story, too. Awesome work.

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Dat twist

Well, That was super funny! Great job!! I really like the use of SFX!

I love the thick outlines and the smash bros sounde effects, Great work!