Entertaining

So this one was a tad bit "STRANGE" the "VIEW-SCREEN" was a tad bit scratchy and fuzzy was there something wrong with the recording of this it just looked odd, but as for the "CONTENT" itself it was actaully notbad and has some nice action with sticks I would suggest adding some fancy effects and maybe even some new scenes and whatnot, but regardless this was cool.

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I would suggest adding some fancy effects and maybe even some new scenes and whatnot

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YeAh i see you worked hard on it but why not upload file?

The sound is fine, but this feels like it was recorded off of a screen. The fuzzy glow distorts any existing lines in the animation which makes it hard to watch.