Okay, but it's not really much of a flash movie
It wasn't a bad comic, but why the hell use an Animation program for something that isn't the least bit animation? I hate when people put up flash movies that aren't a movie or game...Try making your next "animation" have animation in it. If you had that comic there in animation, I would have given you a 6, because it isn't that great even if I rated it as a non-animated comic.
I like the comic book style you set up. Maybe you could add some background music in the later installments. That would probably make the story a little more involving, if you choose the right music for the right situation. Keep up the good work!
it's not a flash movie... it's a comic. not much effort in a comic than in a movie.
really need to add some more animation if you want this to go anywhere, i like the style just needs somthing, also more sound/music would be nice...
Very nice! Try to add more animation sequences and more sound. But this is a great storyline and ill be watching your submissions. Get a better translator! This episode was fine, the last had some basic mistakes. Great overall kepp making them!