Great little bit of animation, really like the style of art, the grass and clouds look lush and I really like the toy bobbing on the water at the end, nicely animated! Overall there are some great shots composition wise, really like the arch under the sea but I feel sound design has let you down a little. Juat a few things like the choice of bird sound (forest bird song rather than gulls at beach) and the sound as they enter the water, it's not quite wet enough and the bubbling underwater sound you use shortly after as they swim past should also be merged with that impact as they descend. Only other small issue I could see was the frame rate appeared to change for some scenes, they didn't seem quite as smooth? Good bit of storytelling and art style though and really liked the characters.
Such a wonderful, imaginative short... the bright and ambient music in the background really brings you in to his world too! Really smooth work, and then the ending... it seems like a commercial for... a turtle?! The name made it seem like something else, but apart from that little disassociation: the adventure's just fantastic.
Wonderful artstyle and good music for the scene. Gives off a wonderful atmosphere. Sound design could do with a little bit of work and the fact this is suppose to be an advert and you only see the text at the end for like 3 seconds kinda takes away from that but either way I really enjoyed this
This looks and feels great. Only thing that stood out was immediately in the beginning where the audio doesn't match the scene. You used a forest field recording when you're scene is at the beach.
The backgrounds are breathtaking...