Pretty good stuff here

I love the "CRUMPLED" paper as the backround you should ad more props back there maybe a pencil or other elements even some colored crumpled paper would be cool, So you have some nice work here the animations are always so smooth and flow well with the animation all the different things happening it makes for some good entertaining fun, you seem to have a lot of these episodes not a bad thing, maybe the shorter ones you could bunch up together in one entry, but anyways nice job here keep up the fantastic work and I look forward for more. I found this flash to be pretty decent now ofcourse there are some things that can bemade better and much more improved those details are explained later, but do try and put some of the ideas in effect as they will only make things better, but anyways decent flash I had fun with them, and most of all keep up the fantastic flash work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you should ad more props back there in the backround along with the nifty crumpled paper, maybe a pencil or other elements even some colored crumpled paper would be cool

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I think this might be the least in the series. I appreciate seeing something different, I suppose. I kind of knew how it would end. Well, literally end. I think this same joke was used somewhere else. Maybe I've just seen so many cartoons I can predict their endings.

This wasn't about murder. Well, it was about writing. I can see why this didn't win Daily Feature. You can be better next time. The animation was still nice.

Vogon poetry?

Who doesn't get scared when the end comes? He is not afraid because he surely knows that this will not be your last animation, or at least I hope so.

Well that was... kinda clever, though seems those other characters all overreacted quite a bit! The last guy, wonder why he didn't. Was he the writer? Did he have a skewed sense of humor? Was he the narrator incarnate? The omniscient one? Interacting with the viewers when the others didn't hmm... strange! Good way to end it, but still doesn't all make sense! Nice cartoon (and was definitely expecting the yellow guy to get something out of the message in the beginning, and then the girl, the usual order, good surprise there).

-cd-