The camera was a bit shaky for the majority of the time, and sometimes the framerate variety was a bit off-putting. The story seems like something that's supposed to convey a message, but it's unclear and I'm not really sure what it's supposed to be. However, I can tell a lot of work went into this and I can respect that. Definitely not blam-worthy material.

Stock motion is a dying breed, but I still like it, I know it is a lot of hard work doing stock motion so you have my respect, good work