Try making more frames and adding sound. Aesthetics are nice, but explicit storytelling and movement are pretty crucial to animations. It's hard work, but your work has potential. keep working at it, man! :)
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Small animation project about anti-hero character (who stole fantastic four clooth) fighting bad guys. Captain Planet he is not.
sadsorcer responds:
Thank you for kind words. I'am thinking on using bone tools for character animation, because frame by frame method is surely time and nerve consuming.
Title sequence is waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too long. I almost just clicked out of it.
The animation was extremely lazy and the frame rate was super low at some parts. All of the actions only had one or two frames and you'd loop them doing things that didn't really make sense.
The art style could be cool but it's really inconsistent and the colors are uncomfortable. The only redeeming quality is the drawings are decent.
I'd go learn the fundamentals of animation and motion.
sadsorcer responds:
I get it. Thank you for response.