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So i worked on some new techniques, i hope you can see the difference. Its more fluid now. Took a little longer aswell.

Serious stuff below...
The people and charachters in this show are completely fictional,
even those based on real characters.
This show may have strong language.

The songs/soundtracks are used for entertainment purposes only.
No copyright infringement intended.
All credits of songs goes to the respectful owners
©2017 Copyright

This video is created by me, so if you tend to steal it, you can
go suck a duck... And i will report you. Is this copyrighted enough?


The overall quality is ok-ish at best. The idea for this series seems pretty funny, but the quality could be better. I think the biggest problem here is the voice acting. Clearly it is all done by the same guy, and the voice actor never sounded like he gave a damn. I strongly recommend getting other voice actors to help you, or at least try harder at voice acting. Speaking of audio, I also recommend music just so that your viewers can be a little bit more engaged, though this is more of a nitpick than anything else. The animation is nothing terrible, but it's not that enjoyable either. Some more movement in the characters wouldn't hurt. I know that art in animation can be pretty subjective in general. So in my opinion, the line-work can be a lot better than what it is. You have a really great idea for a series, but it's just that the quality is sort of holding it back. Don't think I'm hating on you and everything. I'm only giving out constructive criticism. And I hope you take my advice and try to improve in the future. Again, this submission is not awful or anything, but it's not that great either.

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Memerfox responds:

I definitely do not see this as a hatefull comment, i actually find it really helpful. I think criticism makes you great. Anyways, my sense of humor is pretty 'dry' and that's what i (unintentionally) bring forward in the characters. movement is key yes, i agree, but i am not that advanced in working with my programs, like flash etc. But thank you for commenting, i'll try to bring these points to the next episode.

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2.96 / 5.00

Feb 5, 2017
1:58 PM EST
Comedy - Original