Hmm…
I really do enjoy the plot and characters and the design of the characters, but some things seem a little…
Well…
The stiff animation, default fonts and gaps between dialogue are just too similar to the "Law For Kids" flash animations or something like that.
I mean, I'll go easy on it, considering that it's a pilot, but it can use a little polish in some areas and more in others, but once that happens and the characters are fully developed and all that jazz, it'd probably be pretty fuckin' baddass. Like, what I imagine this becoming something I'd look forward to keeping up with.
All it really needs is:
-more lively voice acting (Which it's really almost there)
-More animation and smoother movements and maybe a little more detail (Like hand drawn lettering in the background
-More audio. (Music, sound effects, ambiance, whatever)
Well, it basically just needs to be more lively and express the emotions of the characters better than it does in this pre-pilot thingie.
Rating this at 3.5 because of the fuckload of potential.