YELLING IS NOT A JOKE.
Does it get the viewer's attention? Yes.
Is it funny? No, it's just obnoxious.
Besides that, there were one or two jokes that were pretty funny (the blood jokes and the can jokes), but the rest of the jokes didn't make much sense. Next time I would structure it around one bit, like the segment where one of you threaten to bite your arm off. It could use some more structure.
I have to give props to your animation though, it's really smooth. It is definitely my favorite thing about this cartoon.
Yeah, one time I did ask Kai if he wanted to actually write a script for one of these, and he didn't really agree so maybe I can get him to do so with the next one.
smooth animation, but the humor is extremely lacking. I would suggest writing your jokes rather than improv.
Well that sure was something. lol