Why i gave this 5 stars Point 1 i like the concept of the video and how sonic was weraing obito mask
2 the sprit anmatiaon where good
3 i just liked it
Allso what software did you use to make this
Hello Newgrounds! I'm BlueParadox; a new member of the website and today, I'd llke to show you guys a preview of a sprite animation I'm working on! I've been working on this for a while now and since most people that I know recommended me to show my animations on Newgrounds, I decided to create an account haha! Anyway, I hope you enjoy the preview!
Feel free to leave some feedback by the way! :)
Why i gave this 5 stars Point 1 i like the concept of the video and how sonic was weraing obito mask
2 the sprit anmatiaon where good
3 i just liked it
Allso what software did you use to make this
I've been on Newgrounds a while. Welcome!
Maybe I could give you a couple of tips based upon what I saw. Not too bad and definitely satisfactory. I can see you doing some pretty good sprite animations.
Main thing is sound design. I noticed a couple of audio clips seemed to cut off, reminding me I was watching a cartoon and breaking the immersion. Polish up your audio a bit. Secondly, text reading. Works for subtitles. But as the sole source of dialogue delivery? On Newgrounds you have access to a wide array of actors and actresses waiting for an opportunity to voice in videos who will gladly accept an offer to lend their talents. Check out the Audio Portal! There's plenty of talent there waiting for you to tap into.
Also, that stretch of video where silver just stands there while text is exchanged seemed to drag on a bit for my tastes. I found it rather mundane. Animation is all about movement. Make it move!
My 2 cents. Welcome to Newgrounds!
Thank you for watching my animation & for providing feedback! :)
(Sorry if my english is bad, english is not my main language)
About the audio:
A few people have told me that the audio in the video seems to cut off a little bit haha. I'll look into the audio once I finish adding a few touches to the scenes! :)
About the dialogue/text:
I'm not really sure if I want to add voices to the animation xD
Honestly, I think that the animation without any voice is fine haha. However I could add voices into remakes of my sprite animations. Since I'm going to be studying 2D & 3D Animation at college, I'm planning on remaking my sprite animations in 3D animation or 2D animation and MAYBE I could add voices to those animation remakes because 3D & 2D animations without voices is kinda weird xP
And about Silver just standing without any movement at the end:
Silver's sprites aren't actually official, they're fanmade & his sprite sheet doesn't have a lot of sprites sadly :/
I was planning on making a scene where Silver fights the villain and then he loses and the villain grabs him by the neck but Silver's sprite sheet doesn't have any sprite that would allow me to do this sadly. However, I could think of something so that the animation can have more movement at the end!
Again, thank you so much for your feedback! I will improve my animation based on your feedback! :)