This is our first Animation as a studio. Its part of a month long project we are doing to practice the various stages of animation; writing, recording, animating and editing in a brief amount of time. Mainly to help us focus on the important aspects before we begin working on our bigger, longer projects. This first episode took us a little over a month to complete. Any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated to help us hone our skills for future animations.
Youtube link (help us grow!)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bmvzSXSZo7A
First thing is the only criticism I have, the art quality is poor. But I believe that's because your studio is still new. It seems like it can only improve from here. Your animation quality was great. I loved the jokes. And it had two great lessons at the end. If your looking for love, it probably won't be the first one you meet, and the second is the time honored favorite, look before you leap.
Glad you liked the video and spotted those themes. I appreciate your feedback and will keep that in mind as we move forward. We are mainly doing this series as a quick practice run, before we move on to our bigger more serious projects. Stay tuned, we think the best is yet to come!
After watching this video, I found it comedic and a tad saddening at the end, but there are some minor improvements you could make in my opinion, such as the audio where it was hard to hear unless I was was very close (also, the princess sounded exactly like the mirror.), but the sound effects and music went well with the plot and setting.
Next was the animation, where the characters were hardly blinking and when the knight threw the stool at the mirror it kinda seemed like it glided across instead of rebounding.
Overall this video it gave me good a laugh, great job and I hope you guys make an episode two.
Thank You for the feedback, it is greatly appreciated! We are currently half way through the second episode and will be releasing it soon. Hopefully at a much higher quality. I'm glad you got a good laugh out of the video and i look forward to hearing your opinions on the second episode.