The lizard part cracked me up :D
I usually don't like these kind of on going series animations, but this was alright. You've soften my prejudice, a tiny bit. Nice.
excellent voice acting and setup for the series.
The humor is 10/10. Thoroughly good work with that. Tejz is a really likable main character. Instant favorite.
The sound design seems to be the one thing that needs a lot of attention. I know starting off mic quality can be iffy but the voices could at least be equalized. The wizard lizard was very loud and I had to keep my hand on the volume button. Some ambiance noise would really help out too. I noticed that you are adding some music for the characters as they talk which is a good direction to go. Anyway I really enjoyed this short.
Yeah, sound design is one of my real weak points. Thanks for the advice in that area,
A lot of soul went into this, Great work! I would really look to improve the facial expressions however and also the mouth shapes slightly. Also, for the female I would use a female voice, but I believe that is probably be added when this series continues. The backgrounds look great. The line width however I think would improve by being smaller, although it would be harder to put in all the details I think it would look much better. In terms of story, great job, really interested in the series. This episode was pretty funny too, loved the lizard leg scene. I can't wait to see how this turns out.
Thankyou for the detailed feedback. And yeah, there should be a girl's voice in future episodes.