TJO Trejz Ep1 - Pilot

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Three up-and-coming adventurers struggle to find their place in the world of questing. Full of ambition, full of determination, and full of himself, Tejz will never stop clawing for for success, no matter how much crap he has to drag his way through.

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Trejz, Wise Man, Jim, Senna

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Billybob the Crocofrog, The Wizard Lizard

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Jessica the Dragonfly


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Greta Sting, Enigma - Air by MacLeod (incompetech.com)
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The lizard part cracked me up :D

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I usually don't like these kind of on going series animations, but this was alright. You've soften my prejudice, a tiny bit. Nice.

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excellent voice acting and setup for the series.

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DakNJaxterLazerNails responds:

Thanks :)

The humor is 10/10. Thoroughly good work with that. Tejz is a really likable main character. Instant favorite.

The sound design seems to be the one thing that needs a lot of attention. I know starting off mic quality can be iffy but the voices could at least be equalized. The wizard lizard was very loud and I had to keep my hand on the volume button. Some ambiance noise would really help out too. I noticed that you are adding some music for the characters as they talk which is a good direction to go. Anyway I really enjoyed this short.

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DakNJaxterLazerNails responds:

Yeah, sound design is one of my real weak points. Thanks for the advice in that area,

A lot of soul went into this, Great work! I would really look to improve the facial expressions however and also the mouth shapes slightly. Also, for the female I would use a female voice, but I believe that is probably be added when this series continues. The backgrounds look great. The line width however I think would improve by being smaller, although it would be harder to put in all the details I think it would look much better. In terms of story, great job, really interested in the series. This episode was pretty funny too, loved the lizard leg scene. I can't wait to see how this turns out.

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DakNJaxterLazerNails responds:

Thankyou for the detailed feedback. And yeah, there should be a girl's voice in future episodes.

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3.93 / 5.00

Mar 10, 2016
9:53 AM EST
Comedy - Original